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My, My, What A Tiny Little Building! (nude ver)

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I still can't draw female genitals...ignore that little pink stripe I call a slit.

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My, My, What A Tiny Little Building! by Silverdeath-Succubus
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I just couldn't help myself but to make a critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=":( (Sad)"/>
holy shit there are a lot of little people <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/>
I'll start with the god damn shadow; shadow under the left feet doesn't match, its not a big deal.
but the god damn tail's shadow is totally wrong, I guess you used mirror effect accidentally.
sadly the face looks so masculine <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="380" title=":( (Sad)"/>
hands give it away that you were using a "pose reference" <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> . they are drawn too tough.
just experience as you draw, try new things, make her grab her ass. don't try to stick with the references.
I believe you didn't even draw the boots XD just copy paste?
the fact that the boots has shading and rest of the picture doesn't make the boots look like its they don't belong there.
you thought I was cruel so far? it gets worse!
I actually liked the legs and the booty, I almost got aroused ;3
altho right leg looks thicker than the left one its still good enough
wings look pretty baddass too!